This blog is a place where the Ringling illustration class of '10 can help each other through more in-depth critiques and comments. I suggest that everyone post comments anonymously so that we can all be as honest as possible; HOWEVER, be respectful, helpful and professional please.
Thursday, March 5, 2009
the laviathan
this was an open assignment for advance computer ill. i think i could work on the rocks a little more though. now that i look at them they look rushed or not very clear.
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
values are working great for you, like the palette too, though, i would try to throw color in the shadows instead of such a black looking dark.
one thing i think could help the picture would be to put the background wall/archway in s semi forced perspective, or just angling down more than it already is. It just feels like it was drawn around the head of the monster thing. it kind of "cups" his head if you can see waht im talking about.
also, maybe the light coming from the dude at the bottom could be a little brighter. other than that, cool shapes and composition.
this was an open assignment for advance computer ill. i think i could work on the rocks a little more though. now that i look at them they look rushed or not very clear.
1 comment:
values are working great for you, like the palette too, though, i would try to throw color in the shadows instead of such a black looking dark.
one thing i think could help the picture would be to put the background wall/archway in s semi forced perspective, or just angling down more than it already is. It just feels like it was drawn around the head of the monster thing. it kind of "cups" his head if you can see waht im talking about.
also, maybe the light coming from the dude at the bottom could be a little brighter. other than that, cool shapes and composition.
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