This blog is a place where the Ringling illustration class of '10 can help each other through more in-depth critiques and comments. I suggest that everyone post comments anonymously so that we can all be as honest as possible; HOWEVER, be respectful, helpful and professional please.
Wednesday, February 25, 2009
the assignment was to sell something without showing it. idk if i met the requirements of the assignment, but i enjoyed this piece.
looks really cool, but i think you can play your shapes better with some more value play. I think if the bear had a stronger sillhouette value, is would read easier and faster. not that it doesnt read clearly as a bear, but wiht a stronger shape, it would just be quicker. like the drawing of the hunter.
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love it :]
looks really cool, but i think you can play your shapes better with some more value play. I think if the bear had a stronger sillhouette value, is would read easier and faster. not that it doesnt read clearly as a bear, but wiht a stronger shape, it would just be quicker. like the drawing of the hunter.
wow, i love the colors, this is sweet!
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