This blog is a place where the Ringling illustration class of '10 can help each other through more in-depth critiques and comments. I suggest that everyone post comments anonymously so that we can all be as honest as possible; HOWEVER, be respectful, helpful and professional please.
Monday, February 23, 2009
my sci-fi picture.
1 comment:
Anonymous
said...
you have really cool drawing and colors going on here, but i think you need to play up your values, shapes, and edges.
when you squint your eyes, all you see is the light circular shape which seems like it shouldnt be as important as the dino and the little dude.
if you lightened the whole background, and blured the edges of the caves hole, you would do two things. give teh dinos head a better dark on light silhouette, and lower the importance of the big hole in the cave.
another thing i think you can do is darken the little guy in the forground a lot. he almost dissapears.
i did a quick photoshop dodge and burn to this to show you what i mean. hope you dont mind.
1 comment:
you have really cool drawing and colors going on here, but i think you need to play up your values, shapes, and edges.
when you squint your eyes, all you see is the light circular shape which seems like it shouldnt be as important as the dino and the little dude.
if you lightened the whole background, and blured the edges of the caves hole, you would do two things.
give teh dinos head a better dark on light silhouette, and lower the importance of the big hole in the cave.
another thing i think you can do is darken the little guy in the forground a lot. he almost dissapears.
i did a quick photoshop dodge and burn to this to show you what i mean. hope you dont mind.
http://c4.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images02/13/l_cfada2648f874adbb23bcf6ab504a8bb.jpg
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